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Icarus Flight
The wings came together
Wax to feathers – one by one,
Like the strands of a promise
The covenant of freedom, an escape
In which the whole world shrank
To surround us, but we were invisible
Except to our own eyes, this would become
A tsunami in an afternoon swimming pool,
Momentous in the space of one sole moment.

And then the heavy liberty,
Strapped to our shoulders, suspending
The burden of fear for something altogether
More exhilarating, thumping in our veins
A poisoned pleasure that beat like
My feet on the steps up the cliff, my heart
rang a resonating rhythm:
       running
                   running
                               running.

My foot left the cliff, when I was unaware, and –
Move your arms, he yelled, I was running up
The steps again, or so it felt, my pulse riding
Like a bird on adrenaline. A king; yes
I had become; to count the silver linings
And comb the flax of clouds. Only I
Could barter with the currency of the Sun,
Nobody else would be blessed with liquid gold.
Icarus, touch with your fingertip, or else you’ll be burned
A null-and-void warning in my head;
look what I’d earned! Shut ears, but it seemed
it kept             ringing,                                      
          ringing,             wedding bells ringing,
or was it a funeral, angels singing? Lifting,
higher I was shifting, spots dancing in and out
of the gold in my sight. Touched by the hand of God,
twisting, and still I climbed. Nooo, I heard,
Had he rejected me? Slipping, slipping, I dived
Burning out detachedly to the sound of those
unfamiliar cries, hitting a wall of cold,
wondering, had it been sand, not gold,
that trickled through my fingers,
that evaded my hold?
©2004-2009 ~KrazyJellyBean
:iconkrazyjellybean:

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PLEASE, I BEG YOU, READ THIS. The myth this is based on is here: [link] This means a lot to me, and I will be so grateful if as many people read and comment as is possible. It's short!

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:iconjaxles:
Haha, Icarus, that silly fool. Thinking he could fly to the sun with his wax wings. He obviously never heard of a little thing called "SCIENCE CLASS" where you learn things like the fact that wax would melt that close to heat. :D

I like this. Methinks I'll fave it. :nod:

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Creator of Coca-Mint™
I want to get two customized license plates for my car. One that says CUSTOM, and another one that says PLATES. That way you don't even hafta think about it.
:iconkrazyjellybean:
OMG, thank you so much. You have no idea how much this means to me! :hug:

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Pleasingly deranged.
:iconjaxles:
:hug: You're quite welcome. Even though I tend to laugh at the actual myth itself, you did a great job of creating a piece that would make one feel sorry for Icarus when he failed.

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Creator of Coca-Mint™
I want to get two customized license plates for my car. One that says CUSTOM, and another one that says PLATES. That way you don't even hafta think about it.
:iconkrazyjellybean:
:D I am SO HAPPY. I'm trialling this, and your comment is exactly the kind of thing I want to hear!

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Pleasingly deranged.
:iconjaxles:
And I'm sure you'll get more like it. :nod:

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Creator of Coca-Mint™
I want to get two customized license plates for my car. One that says CUSTOM, and another one that says PLATES. That way you don't even hafta think about it.
:iconkrazyjellybean:
Woohoo.

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Pleasingly deranged.
:iconrushy:
WOW!
Great piece.
You seem to have got the tale down really well here but told in feelings rather than just a commentary.
:+fav:

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Member of :- #britain #DAPensioners .
In vino veritas, nunc est bibendum. - In wine is truth, now we must drink.
:iconkrazyjellybean:
I LOOOOOOVE YOOOOOOOOOOOO

Thank you so so much. The first two people to comment both faving it - I feel like I'm going to cry. This piece is important for many reasons.

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Pleasingly deranged.
:iconrushy:
It was well worth the :+fav: too.
Really took you up there with him :)

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Member of :- #britain #DAPensioners .
In vino veritas, nunc est bibendum. - In wine is truth, now we must drink.
:iconkrazyjellybean:
:D THANK YOU! This is making me so happy. I can totally use this!

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Pleasingly deranged.

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